- D'yer Mak'er
- “...drifting to the streets of no destination was my eternal passtime... n' then comes the moment of gettin' caught in the swamps of memory... followed by hurried motion of arms n' legs. suffocatin' in the depths of past again n' again. all of these had a custom of layin' myself down in the tracks of reality.. n' then' would come the train of life... tearin' n' shatterin' every part of me. to still carry myself all torn n' withered n' broken was undoubtedly the worst part.”
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I don't know what to say...I'm speechless... n I'm shaking my head in disbelief! I just felt...blessed somehow
@mirage -->>.. no one bothers to change those lights of the lighthouses...even though everyone expects an ever glowin brightness from it....you don't have to say much...for speechlessness says the most...
stranger n his strange ways
different is it your middle name
but whtever u write is true
why is it so difficult to be our true selves
why does the mirror always reveal a stranger
@dhruv -->>.. if only a mirror can actually reveal a stranger!...but it only makes one...
Even i am speechless... wordless.
take care.
hmm..well written,but it hasn't got me speechless like the others...
"as candid as mirror",candid enough to even reveal the harsh truth.makes u realise the harsh fact of ur life even if u want to ignore it...something that can make u feel reluctant to even deal with it...so harsh that it can make u cripple for a life time...read my blog:"disfiguered life",n u'll know wat i'm talkin about and the uncomfortable"candid"conversation that goes between u and mirror..
@manjari -->> ..I'll...n' i expect the same from you!
@triplesix -->> ..i feel conversations never deal with candidness...they all reflect prejudice....everyone of us defendin n' lookin our own side....be it a conversation with your friends...with your mom...with your mirror....or be it between us!....n' if you ask me...i'll say ignorance is a bliss...for then i could have ignored those pains no matter how many scars i carry.
"conversations nvr deal with candidness..they all reflect prejudice"-u may be right on this cos prejudiced opinion is wat non-candidness knid character indulge in for a favour in return...
"ignorance is a bliss"--how long? mr stranger,how long?
"for then i cud have ignored those pains no matter how many scars i carry"--u can ignore them by not lookin at it,but they'll nvr ignore u,even without their glance at u...cos "they"(the pain:the truth,the fact)know that they r a part of u,perpetually.and u can runaway frm it...or hide them!!
sry,they r some words missin,therefore i'm rewriting those lines to avoid any confusion
"conversations nvr deal with candidness..they all reflect prejudice"-u may be right on this cos prejudiced opinion is wat non-candidness character indulge in for a favour in return...
"ignorance is a bliss"--how long? mr stranger,how long?
"for then i cud have ignored those pains no matter how many scars i carry"--u can ignore them by not lookin at it,but they'll nvr ignore u,even without their glance at u...cos "they"(the pain:the truth,the fact)know that they r a part of u,perpetually.and u can't runaway frm it...or hide them!!
hey did u get time to check my blog.was expectin some comments
@triplesix -->> ..
to avoid any confusion
you can never avoid confusion...no matter how hard you try
u may be right on this
...this has got nothin to do with right or wrong...everythin dealt here is a personal compilation of opinions through my livin...n' at no point intends to attract approval or recognition....n' neither endorsements!
how long? mr stranger,how long?
...few impulses are insectile in form....few delights are crepuscular...not bounded by time or space.
they'll nvr ignore u,even without their glance at u
...n' which is why i long to be ignorant...both visually n' quintessentially.
they r a part of u,perpetually.and u can't runaway frm it...or hide them!!
...doesn't matter if they happen to be perpetual or ephemeral.....few mule carts have stoicism approved in their veins
"deep within this shallow soul."
shallow?
i very seriously doubt it.
@DC -->> ..
"you doubt if they're scars...when you're pointin to a leper"
...seek for no explainations
when i can offer only doubts...
how can you hope for some wine...
........when my bottle is filled with melody of silence.
simple to complexity,complexity to simple....dsn't that avoid confusion...wn't u prefer to have simple things than the complexed ones....wn't feel all the more btr and relaxed if life wasn't creatin complexities even on lil things...and sometimes its the simple things that tires u the most...there's confusion, a lot of confusion,but it all gets dispersed when u try to catch hold of them and grab it in ur hand...i know grabbin is not all that easy,but not removin confusion dsn't solve any further...
"no right or wrong"....u say it deals with 'personal compilation of opinions'...if it does,then it shud be a two way process...u say this,and i say this and etc,etc,etc...but one thing is for sure that all this dsn't indulge any ardent notions of any person...its just the way u comment when asked for, and thats what the others do..and this what a two way process is,and the feedback.well...thats upto u;and thus "the rights and the wrongs" arises.
"not bounded by time or space"....ru sure bout it!!!cos everything in this wrld is measured by time and space...which is why we say too little,too small,too tiny,and with things that we despise...too big,too monstrous,too huge...thats how pain is dealt,and thats how ur ignorance wnt deal with u when ur in pain...it wn't leave u alone,even if u ignore it..
"i long to be ignorant"....i still say it dsn't and it will nvr help...u'll nvr be helped,cos it's like a parasite...ignorin will only make u more weak....my suggestion to u is to go to the matrices...fight back,cos if u want peace then get ready for war...cooperation will only double ur pain..
"few mule carts hve stoicism approved in thier veins"...one line and u r inspired....not good!!!need to have faith in urself..faith that can help u have potential of ur own and not rely on others...
its upto u....u dn't have to take my opinions seriously,just have to recontemplate and reconsider on ur perceptions and how is it dealin with u,if u feel is necessary....
"there are things known,and there are things unknown,and in between are the doors."-blaike.
so as i say again,the decision is urs...u want to live in the known or the unknown...u want to be alice in the wonderland,or the rabbit diggin the hole only to get what wanted...
[plez dn't get hurt,if u feel my intention was such..i'm only placin my comments..2 way process!!]
ru online...i mean workin on ur blog...surprising!!!how r u doin?
Pardon me for not coming up with something that u cud scribble on ur wall.
Whatever i wrote,lay crumpled in a heap in a corner coz nothing seemed good enuf for that wall of yours...sigh...hav i lost the Midas touch?has da ink in my pen dried?i do not know...
@she -->> ..
i never ask to get somethin...then what's the purpose of askin?...maybe if someone will ever know that!...but those walls long to be empty...n' let 'em be empty...that request was only an attempt to gauge the reactions of your neurons...n' i guess my attempt do not belong to the failed category list....take care!
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