Monday, August 29, 2005

n' I Imagine....


well i don't see the whole of it.....i see in parts.....lips bathed with wetness.....with that whip slash stroke by the tongue....with your pen tip bitten by those razor sharp teeth....while you attend that borin lecture...hairs wavin behind....n' your glance...only for a while outside the window....seein a few young children playin in the mud....remindin you of your home...but then you gain back your senses...n' pen down a note from the professor....when suddenly some old funny episode craps up your seriousness.....you end up gigglin...or rather makin an effort to stop giggling.....just when your enchantin orbicularis oculi is excited to its peak....when there's this slight downfall of the skin between your upper eyelid n' your eyebrow...

...n' i only see that piece of chocolate...you unwrappin that chocolate...with long slender fingers...nails still unpolished.....with a motion so slow that reminds me of the strip joint where i've never been!...n' those lips slowly openin...while that wetness still retardin those openin motions...makin that action a gradual one...the wave passin from left to right...the chocolate finally enterin..while the tongue holdin the piece from the down...reminds me of the cradle that i never slept in when i was a child!.....that sweet taste of the choco excitin the parotid glands....forcin that extra secretion of saliva...rushin all towards that chocolate...showin no sympathy at all...fillin the mouth with more wetness.......while a sudden feelin of contraction in the mouth...as an effort to grasp the whole of the sweetness...remindin me of the anaconda which never attacked me....

...n' i only see the part when the bathin ritual is just over...while the body still embraced tightly by the towel...jealously removin even a drop of air between the towel n' the body...like a long lastin lover....while i only see that droplet which makes a perfect spiral path originatin from the neck..n' finally reachin the floor...through all those curves....while the face blushes....even in the solitude...while the mirror happens to be the portray...artists fight to claim as their master piece...reminds me of Vinci's Leda....n' the body sways involuntarily...with the music played in the stereo next room....the music...as if desperate to dance...somehow managin to enter the room...

...n' i only see the ball room....me standin in a dark corner...the hand over his coat....that ring sparklin so brightly...stoppin me to see those fingers......n' the hair showin a perfect centrifugal motion...as the slow motioned rollin is bein done in the ball...makin me unnotice every other dancer in the room....while the room is ligted with bright lights...i only find the moon as the spotlight to see their dance....

...n' i only see the hurried foot steps...in the effort of comin downstairs...as if everytime the previous record of gettin down has to be broken....both those hands holdin that long skirt..liftin it a bit...revealin those shoes...where those eyes workin in perfect simple harmonic motion...lookin at the steps n' the door...with a time period of 2.5 seconds.....

n' i imagine......

26 Comments:

Mirage said...

Hmm...so you've got your eye on someone in your class!?? ;)

Just kiddin man! Well written, as always...

desperado said...

beautiful sketch
made by u?
brilliant analogies i must say
(as well as strange especially the anaconda one...)

n i guess u have noticed the lady from very close range
i could feel the taste of chocolate in my mouth ..lol
but as mirage well written as always

D'yer Mak'er said...

@mirage -->> ..

no one in the class(sigh!)...
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@dhruv -->> ..

nah!...my sketches never reach any canvas...their limitations always lie inside my brain....just like my expressions...

p.s. hmm..watched very closely...so closely that even closeness seems to be so so so far!

Dreamcatcher said...

Its a good thing to know that the She here does exist..but well she probably doesnt know she's getting such dancing words dedicated to her..

you remind me of something i once wrote..

D'yer Mak'er said...

@dc -->> ..

Its a good thing to know that the She here does exist
..oh yeah!...it's damn good....but what!!!!!

but well she probably doesnt know she's getting such dancing words dedicated to her..
...yeah..you got me....she doesn't know at all(sigh)...but that isn't a requirement....for i've got enough fuel inside me...to keep this flame burnin!!!!

p.s. hey...come closer...somethin to be told..off the record...the character is yet to be seen by me...for i never met her...n' i ain't lyin.

Anjalika said...

hey i'm back...after being banished by...let it be(wink)...
hahahaha!!!!

u know wat...read ur self written post again with beethoven's music titled "moonlight" playin...it'll be like watchin a film..
while i was readin ur post,i was listenin to this piece,and must confess,it made ur post all the more beautiful..
just try it..i dn't remember the symphony,cos it was comin on the radio,but its one of my fav track and thats how i rem the name of that piece..
but there's one thing itchin my senses...wat was "anaconda" doin while u were describin the sweetness of the chocolate...jus kiddin,
but,still, seriously speakin,y anaconda?

Dreamcatcher said...

So enamoured by someone you havent met;-)iam sure you've seen her in scraps of people here and there ...

Anjalika said...

oh...i forgot bout the pic...i liked it,infact i finished drawin it too...but dsn't this image remind u of Tori Amos(singer)

MM said...

she surely stirred your feelings and imagination...beautifully written n the pic is beautiful too.

D'yer Mak'er said...

@triplesix -->> ..

hey i'm back
...n' there you're (sigh)!!!!!!!!

read ur self written post again with beethoven's music titled "moonlight" playin
..n' here's a bow to acknowledge the remark.

it'll be like watchin a film..
..am almost on my knees now...

must confess,it made ur post all the more beautiful..
....alright...lyin on the floor now!!

but,still, seriously speakin,y anaconda?
...but still....seriously speakin....why not!!!
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@dc -->> ..

iam sure you've seen her in scraps of people here and there ...
...(sigh)..not even scraps...not even here..not even there!!
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@triplesix -->> ..

but dsn't this image remind u of Tori Amos(singer)
...my dear forgetful journalist....well was that a question...for it sounded like one..but no question mark...but here's my answer...no!..it doesn't!!!!!!(wink)
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@manjari -->> ..

she surely stirred your feelings and imagination
....(sigh)...i thought i heard a lullaby...while all she turned on is the switch of the organ grinder!!
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D'yer Mak'er said...

@anyonymous+@dan+@anonymous -->> ..

....not here people...not here...if anythin you can give me..then let it be a few moments of solitude..before i find the bullet in my head that i've been seekin for....don't give these ****in ads for god's sake!

p.s. happy birthday dan... although i know it's not your birthday!

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Anjalika said...

besharam!!!....how many times ru goin to wink at me...
i'll publish that in the newspaper now...
"stranger winikn at a journalist,shudn't the bloggers do smthin bout it?..."

hahahahaha...
wink;)

D'yer Mak'er said...

@triplesix -->> ..

you gotta be healthy...for they say laughter is the best way to earn a good health...n' you do laugh a lot!

...here's raisin a toast for your good health n' my good looks!(wink)

Anonymous said...

Looks like the party is already over...i arrived too late...that too when i was the guest of honour in this party.

D'yer Mak'er said...

@she -->>..

parties can be extended...honours can be re-awarded...but i wonder..if only that wait can be nulled!!!...the wait for an arrival...that never arrives...or when arrives....there's no one left...but only empty bottles...broken plates...n' an uncut cake with an unligted candle!

Anjalika said...

hmmmm....dn't pull up ur collars too much for ur good looks.
Exceptions are there,so i dn't mind doin that for myself...hahahahaha!!!

D'yer Mak'er said...

@triplesix -->> ..

what exceptions are you talkin about...n' what exactly you wanna do??

Anjalika said...

u think i'm goin to do smthin that might shock u...na..i'm not like that...wrong presumptions!!

and the exception......
"Exceptions are there,so i dn't mind doin that for myself...hahahahaha!!!"
in this case,"that" means pullin up collars,and i dn't mind doin "that' for myself..
too bad u cn't think quick...try drivin a speedin car,u'll enjoy and u'll be quick!!

D'yer Mak'er said...

@triplesix -->> ..

but lemme tell you this...not only your presumptions...but also your postsumptions are wrong!!!!.... all it was a young boy askin a young girl what exactly she wants to do!...was that too complicated?

in this case,"that" means pullin up collars,and i dn't mind doin "that' for myself.
...so you wear collars??..shirt collars?????...you wear shirts??...but why the hell you wanna wear shirts??(wink!!!)...but don't you think you pull a lot of things....legs...collars...makes me wonder what else you do pull!!!

try drivin a speedin car,u'll enjoy and u'll be quick!!
..but i also enjoy doin "other" stuffs which definitely teaches me to be quick!!!!

Anjalika said...

hmmmm...well what can i say...
no comments
for its not easy for me to deal with someone who thinks is smart,but is actually indulgin himself into immature talks...
wat else i can pull.....well i have already done that...in the above statement..
other things for that quickness...i dn't even want to guess...(now keep winkin till u get tired)
lol.....

D'yer Mak'er said...

@triplesix -->> ..

well what can i say...no comments
...was longin to hear that..finally!

its not easy for me to deal with someone who thinks is smart
..too bad for you..you've always dealt with "unsmart" people.

i dn't even want to guess
....but why the "even" part.."even want to guess"...after all....that's all you can do...

Anjalika said...

u only saw what u wanted to see,but not wat u should...thts the reason y ur still immature....oversmartness wn't take u anywhere,pal..if only u had a sense of maturity in u...
too sad u cn't get that...

D'yer Mak'er said...

@triplesix -->> ..

lemme tell you somethin that was incidentally told to me by a very "matured" person...don't argue with fools....for people may not know the difference.

p.s. don't you dare call me pal...ever!!!

Anjalika said...

ok..pal...oh..sry!!!forgot some1 here is a misanthrophist...