Tuesday, August 23, 2005

Yoshimi Vs. The Pink Robot.


i guess it's time for yet another application of the concoction theory....a story about a girl....a girl who lived in the other side of the mountain....the mountain which somehow don't have a peak....she lived in the banks of the river.....the river where no ripples ever form....a girl who is like a non-sequel-ed version of a story...but with a "to be continued" note....a girl who is like a play....the playwright hasn't written yet...........n' i'm the storyteller who doesn't know her....doesn't know her at all.....what's her story all about.........but i still dare to narrate...relyin only on the constructions from all my ancestral peer births.

she's yoshimi.....a maiden who's not at all pretty....she definitely don't have long hair....n' incidentally....they're all straight!...she has this strange dislike for "wet lips" n' "deep dimples" ....... she don't belong to that insane group....those young beautiful girls fall....for she don't even momentarily lose her sanity....she ardently loves all those cliched variables in every equation .... her vocabulary consists of 47 words...which she arranges in the most unprecendented manner .. whenever she writes....yoshimi never learnt to play the piano....but still her mom misses her the most.....for she's her only daughter.....n' not to forget...her waist measures 26.998 inches.

n' yoshimi has a virtual lover...virtual in the sense that both have different grounds to stand on with varied altitudes.....but still they've a connection...through an unreliable channel...he's the pink robot who happens to play the pipe....but only on the other side of the mountain....but sadly....the pink robot never crosses that mountain....even though yoshimi always waits for him....n' always calls him..."come over...this moutain don't even have a peak!"...but the pink robot won't leave that land of machines.

n' yoshimi waits for him...everyday of her life.....sittin on those rocks beside the river...throwin pebbles...but no one ever notices...for no ripples ever form in that river....n' the story continues .....

...while she continues to live in those dreams of findin neverland.....she goes on longin for those diamonds on the rings of gold........but never understands that she's that hyper-oyster....who owns endless n' priceless pearls burried within her.....she goes on cryin every night.....failin to realize that she's losin somethin more exotic n' rarer than those myriad blue rubies...in form of those drops of tears.....n' she smiles while she's bleedin...lettin me see her blood which reminds me of those berries that can bring back to life even a century old mummy.


n' here i'm...standin in stupefaction....when all my questions seek one answer...what should yoshimi do?....n' i wonder if anybody has the answer....so that i can tell yoshimi.....

i want to take
the side of joy
n' have a ride
with this queen of troy

i want to see
the face that hides
in the vertical
lake of pride

i want to lose
my grip to hold
this sinkin ship
that carries gold

i want to brush
those shades of grey
i dream you get
what i wish i pray

want to tell the truth
with lies to fill
n' give you more
than the tax they bill

i want to die
in the world i live
to see you smile
like a broken rhyme

i want to shoot
with the arquebus
to make you free
from the chains of dust

n' here it comes
the innocent
i just want to give
a compliment

tailpiece from the author

this whole piece is purely fictional...for it exactly does not match with the real character.

18 Comments:

Tabula_Rasa said...

What if i tell the world,the real character does exist....
What if i say,u made me smile yet again....seems like ages since i last smiled.
BTW,Check ur mail..

Dreamcatcher said...

I read and reread before writing this..as you so eloquentlysay "dont talk to starngers" which ironically enough you are encouraging ppl who comment to do;-)..but because this is a fictional piece and because i dont know you - i 'll just say that its a very nice piece of writing. i might be assuming a lot of things ..and i hate it when ppl do the same about me and do so wrongly.

Mirage said...

Your words are... Its so easy to form a picture in my mind as I read whatever you write... almost feel I'm in it all!

D'yer Mak'er said...

@dc -->> ..

first thing first....as issues were raised about this quite a few times....that tag "don't talk to strangers" do have a purpose.....firstly it tries to give the world a suggestion (a very faint, non-distinct, n' implicit one though!)...that i've been listenin to this song "don't talk to strangers"......by dio when i first came up with this blog thing...which was somewhere in early february....n' i'd like to say somethin...that february brought a few dry winds that blew more than leaves...which is why i'm feelin now that i'm goin out of the issue n' you're already lookin at your watch!!...but most important issue....that tag is meant for "strangers" n' not for the "familiar" strangers...so i guess we're clear now!!

n' regardin your assumption theory...you've got the best volunteer ever...n' i'd like to study every corollary of that theory!....for i've lost quite a few stares in search of one glance...n' now i don't wanna lose those chances of viewin eyes aimin at me....what if they wanna shoot me....atleast they're not lookin through me!

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@mirage -->> ..

if only i could have got a canvas like your mind...which could draw the pictures even before i hold my brush!

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@nomadic_waves -->> ..

what if i tell the world that "they" most of the times fail to comprehend what lies beneath...what if i tell that sometimes virtuality is more proufound n' existin than this hackneyed reality....what if i say...that it's the most difficult to make someone smile...whose smile really makes a difference.....what if i say i've more sympathy on those ages than my absence....for it was devoid of all those opportunities to see n' hear you smile....i only wish if you have some sympathy.....on this age..n' not to forget... on me as well!!

p.s. that was really warm..i mean your concern for me....for remindin me to check my mail...which i always do...but i fail to work out....if there was any other reason for that call.....for my mail box doesn't carry any mails from anyone i happen to know but haven't met yet!

desperado said...

if its fictional as u say hats off to ur creative ability
its easier to have somethin in ur mind but its really difficult to express it in the manner that u r able to do...
as for on the piece why cant yoshimi cross over??
thts just my doubt

D'yer Mak'er said...

@dhruv -->> ..

ofcourse it's fictional...why? you know someone like yoshimi..for if you do...tell her that i don't know her!!...hmm..there're issues...yoshimi can't cross over....maybe her legs are tied...maybe she stands on a pedestal....maybe she has washed her skirt which is not willin to dry....but forget about those maybe's ...but there happens to be a definite reason....a bad one...she can't cross over..n' won't even rhyme the symphony...have you ever heard of a fairy tale where the princess crosses rivers...climbs mountains...even if there're such tales...no one likes 'em!!

desperado said...

well i havent heard such tales
but i would like to hear one
even if it is only fairy tale
atleast dreams can show what realty cannot

Dreamcatcher said...

Why is she versus the Pink Robot?

D'yer Mak'er said...

@dhruv -->> ..
but dreams can never show you what realities cannot....for dreams are actually realities....maybe yours...maybe not yours...but they're real!
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@dc -->> ..

Oh My God!!!...she read it one more time???...that was more than a Pulitzer Prize for me....if only it had a form like the oscars...i could have shown it to my friends n' tell 'em.."don't you dare call me loser anymore!!"...

p.s. standin in the opposite doesn't always mean you're in the opposition....for it's always the contrast that fills the absence of those missin colors!

Dreamcatcher said...

Oh god someone needs lessons in minimum modesty or is that sarcasm i wonder..

D'yer Mak'er said...

@dc -->>..

oh! that was SSSSSSSssssssO not sarcasm...but makes me wonder..if only i ever get an able teacher!

Dreamcatcher said...

good that wasnt sarcasm..
and yeah u shud get a teacher.
and before u ask ..i wud love to volunteer.
btw very weird blogspot conversation this.

D'yer Mak'er said...

@dc -->> ..

need i tell you ...i always have a strong affinity towards volunteers!!!!...n' yeah...weird it is to have such a conversation spot....when i do have a tag board...but trust me...it could have been a lot more weird!!..we still are safe enough to say that we're not that weird!!!!!

Mirage said...

You are the brush, n all of us who visit here are the canvasses. Imagine how many paintings u make with a single stroke!

MM said...

How do you do it? u weave words so beautifully. Do i need to say i like to read what u write , or my being here says it all.

D'yer Mak'er said...

@mirage -->>..
i don't know what's salvation is all about...but i don't think it's gonna be somethin different than that..for i feel heaven...when all my life....i ran lookin for a corner of a wall to inscribe a single letter..when someone buys me the entire sky to draw on!

@manjari -->>..
if she lets me say what ronan keating once said..."you say it best when you say nothin at all..."

Dreamcatcher said...

No new post?

D'yer Mak'er said...

@dc -->> ..

i wanted to write..n' i also did write...but somethin very bad came up...n' was havin second thoughts if i should post it...for now..i've got readers...that do have that skill of readin between those lines....