Friday, December 16, 2005

here i'm...

when the old lady rocks in the arm chair..with the knittin needles in her hand....
some knots just slip away when she helds the thread real tight...
n' when she raises her eyebrow the ball just rolls away...
here i'm.....right there i'm....

the parked car at a hyper market...the horn reminds you of a symphony...
when you hear your heatbeats moanin into some unrhymed melody...
when you're not too sure if it's you or your thoughts keep wanderin more...
here i'm...right there i'm...

when you tell the bed time story to the little child...
the story of a rebel that got a legend on his back...
n' just when you find no answer to a question of that child...
here i'm...right there i'm...

when the sign boards sway apart when a fast car crosses it...
you see the light that kiss the grasses who see the car go by...
when you're not too sure if the sign board blocks its vision...or it's just the empty street...
here i'm...right there i'm...

when you see that lonely glance...in a lonely stranger's eyes...
when you're not too sure who kept that can in the empty windy road...
the weak kick that he strikes to the can makes it fly away...
n' lands up in the bushes n' it can't see that stranger again...
here i'm....right there i'm....

when he steps inside a restaurant...outnumbered ...he takes the seat...
the corner seems not to bother...but he feels there are eyes to meet...
n' just when the waiter turns for his table...but only finds the cigarette foil...
here i'm....right there i'm...

when the night begins to howl...n' you're at page 69 of some mystique novel
n' you feel like you've seen some word you like ...just when you turned the page...
n' as you rolled your eyes to find it again...but just don't make it through...
here i'm...right there i'm....


here i'm....bearin my cross...
there i'm....startin to end...
here i'm....right there i'm...

7 Comments:

Anonymous said...

The extended comment box was good.
...thank you very much!!

The comments on some other comment box were good.
...**he blushes**..well..thank you again!

But nothing compares to the real thing
.... **he's completely out of breath..havin no clue how to answer this remark!!**

Now seeing this,mine appears a misnomer. sigh.
...**grrr!!**...now here's a real confession...i like certain things...n' when people say anythin...A-N-Y-T-H-I-N-G not really against 'em...but slightly outside my comfort range....then i don't like it all....how dare you say anythin like this for somethin i like so much..misnomer?....bullshit!! **grrr!!**

I know where to get back after the current phase.
...phase?..are you the moon??..hey wait!!!...you look like a single character...**moon is a single character**....you're charmin...**moon is charmin**...you work in phases...**moon works in phases**...hey i got it..you're the moon ...ain't ya?..ofcourse you're!!

p.s. ...good to have you hear bro!....your presence always marks some kind of significance somehow!!..you hit the 100th comment few days back...n' now you entered my blog on a day...when i'm really really happy!!

take care!

Dreamcatcher said...

:P says the guy who wudnt let anyone in...
contradictions contradictions..

Anonymous said...

**flash back**

***1 year ago***

Have discovered that in myself lie these contradictions.



Sometimes i feel iam so old but then again iam just 19 havent really lived such a long time but maybe ive seen a lot.Grown a lot and not changed at all.Living contradiction of course



n' just for the record....if anyone might wonder....these lines were of dc...n' hey...who's dc?...yeah...dc stands for dreamcatcher!!!..the one who confesses she's the livin contradiction....accuses others to be one!!!!!...

p.s. ..n' by the way...when you wrote those lines....you were not 19...you were 19 n' half..not even half...more than that infact...i don't believe anyone can lie about her age like this!!!..shhhhhhhame on you!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

the guy who wudnt let anyone in...
contradictions contradictions..


...on prolonged second thoughts!!!...hmm!...well..so you don't want me to contradict hmm?...so you want me to do exactly the way i said hmm?...are you sure??

Dreamcatcher said...

^*(^*(^* elucidate second comment and dont quote me to me...(^*(^
i admit i contradict hmph!

Anonymous said...

^*(^*(^* elucidate second comment and dont quote me to me...(^*(^
...oh my god!!..look at you...just like the walkin boss!!!!

i admit i contradict hmph!
...but i've already admitted ... i love to lose.... when it comes with you...

p.s. elucidate second comment
...so is it a statement that you no longer understand me....or is it a statement that you never understood me??

Anonymous said...

n' just for the record...i don't always contradict what i say...n' maybe it's not always contradictions that we live inside us...probably there're contradictions that live all around us...